Can’t Get your House Sold : Look at the Remarks/Description. This Bad Description can be making your House like day old bread Stall :#53

I going to start by saying I am the worst writer of all times . When it comes to writing remarks it takes me 3-4 days to write 500 words Write up . I understand my weakness this truly way I write my blog to work through my weakness . I know I will become the unbelievable writer I feel like I am with practice and study better writers .

I know you don’t need to aim to be perfect . I have seen people work so hard to be perfect that never even start doing it wrong . You know this people they the first to point out all your mistakes and errors . They don’t even try to even put themselves out there . So let look at one power Tool as a Remark/Description writer I came when I got my Real Estate License.

The one Toll you must use in Your Remarks is build Emotion and Feeling . You must make the Buyer feel what like to live in the Home . You don’t just state the details 3 bedroom 2 bath . Bellow is simple of one of my Write ups . As you can see it not wow but it The emotion and Feeling all over it . What is your thoughts ? Read your Remarks How can you make them Emotional and Build Feeling . Your Singing a Song with Words . I never saw people move from Statements

Mint charming, sun-filled, beautifully landscaped colonial with great flow, ideal for entertaining on quiet one-way street in highly sought after Hickory Hill neighborhood. Main level has an open floor plan with living-dining and sun room, a wood burning fireplace, powder room, and updated kitchen with new appliances. Dining room with sliding glass doors to deck and private backyard. Upper level has a large master retreat with sitting area and master bath. Two additional bedrooms, hall bath and a spacious bonus room (office/playroom/guest bed) with cathedral ceiling and lots of natural light complete this level. Gleaming hardwood floors throughout. Partially finished basement with wonderful play space/family room with walkout to private patio and backyard, abundant storage, laundry & utility room. Additional attic storage with pull-down stairs. Walking distance to Crestwood Station (32 Minutes into Grand Central Terminal) and centrally located between the Bronx River and Hutchinson parkways make this home an easy commute. Enjoy close proximity to parks, walking/biking trails, shopping, restaurants, and schools. Spend your weekends running or biking Bronx River Parkway Sunday closures, at Lake Isle Country Club (membership eligible) and shopping at the Tuckahoe Station farmers market. Walking Distance to neighboring Ann Hutchinson elementary school, as well as middle and high schools. Make this picture perfect house and neighborhood yours, and let the memories begin!

Start Reading Writing Books . If your looking for recommends let us know . If your Real Estate agent doesn’t understand the important of Remarks/Description rethink . Have I always written the best Remarks no I don’t see the importance until 2012. I was late to the copywriter skill . As agent we need to be the best story tellers . We are in story telling so that Buyers can feel what buying . Clients can feel why they should work with you .